Okay.
You read review so I'll write what I have to say. For something that took you one year of your life, it really is a big let down. I'm sorry to say this, but I really imagine the big fight kinda like "With My Mind's Madness" that MindChamber did, but this was, how shall I put it... unsatisfactory. I admirate your motivation a courage to pursue a one year project, but this isn't a one year project result. The drawing was poor, the animation felt non fluid and the story was confusing. The song isn't as adrenaline paced as this kind of movie requires. I will say however that if this is one of your earliest project, I am congratulating you for it. I only hope that with time you will get better and do much, much more.
And for the love of god, go buy a graphic tablet. This will make your work much more easier, and much, much more vibrant because it will take out much of your work and you'll be able to make much more fluid animation.
I'M NOT THE TRUTH. THIS IS ONLY MY OPINION. Do what you want with it.